Treatment for film.Title: In SuspenseNEWS REPORT
News reporter talks about deaths of SIMON SPENCER and SCARLETT HART shows picture of incident
FLASH OF WHITE – to show flashback“TWO WEEKS EARLIER” - on screen text
BATHROOM
Simon Spencer looking in bathroom mirror wearing shirt and suit trousers.Ties tie. Internal diegetic NARRATION post synchronisation – talks about life – Scarlett – being in the gang and hating it.Puts on leather jacket. Walks out of room.
BIG HOUSE + DRIVEWAY
Simon gets out of car.Walks to front door and is about to knockDAVID “Pidge” PIGEON opens door before he can knock “You’re late.” Mock seriousness.Joking they walk down hallway – shows them being best friends.
LIVING ROOM
Big dog barks at Simon “Calm down Audrey.” – MIKE STEELTense atmosphere.The gang has a meeting – we introduced to Scarlett and the other members here.They talk about a deal that they have got going down.Mike gives Simon the responsibility of running the “operation”Scarlett stands behind Mike Steel has her hand on his shoulder – shows they are supposed to be “together”
KITCHEN
Simon and Scarlett are in the kitchen making coffee – flirtatious – sexual tension. Walks towards her. Hand on wall leaning over her. KEVIN interrupts – He is suspicious.
LIVING ROOM
We see Kevin whisper something to Mike. There is a montage of moments showing all the times he has seen Scarlett and Simon flirting – pieces it together that they were obviously having an affair, right under his nose and he has only just seen this.
LATER ON - LIVING ROOM
It is darker showing it is later in the day.Mike says he wants Kevin to take over the lead in the deal.Everyone is leaving. Mike asks Simon to stay behind for a moment.Threatens him about Scarlett. Makes the offer of £10,000 to leave and never come back or he’ll kill him.Simon takes the money.
STAIRWAY
Scarlett is watching this happen. Runs upstairs visibly upset.
DRIVEWAY
Simon leaving looks up at windows seemingly guilty. He is actually looking for a place to sneak in and find her.
LATER
Simon climbs up the side of the house and knocks on the bathroom window. He climbs in and asks her to run away with him. She agrees after some convincing.Throws some clothes and money into a bag. They sneak out.
DRIVEWAY
Both get in car and drive away at high speed.
FRONT DOOR
Mike opens the door angrily and sees them turning the corner.
IN THE CAR
Scarlett and Simon driving away exhilarated.
IN THE HOUSE
Mike shouting hysterically down the phone. Calls up the rest of the gang.
HOTEL
Scarlett and Simon book a room under different names. At first it is exciting. After a while Scarlett begins to panic that they won’t be able to get away from Mike and if he finds them she knows he will kill them. Simon calms her down - assured that everything is going to be alright.
HOUSE - DINING ROOM
Mike and the gang members are planning a man hunt to capture Simon and Scarlett. Some are up for it. Others are not so comfortable with the idea e.g. Pidge – being Simon’s best friend.Talk about hotels where they could be – what names could they be under.Stumble across the idea when Johnny “Jobster” O’Brian makes a joke about them being like Bonnie and Clyde.Gang calls up local hotels they have in fact booked a room under the names Bonnie Hart and Clyde Spencer.Mike sends Johnny and Kevin to the hotel.
HOTEL
They are talking and packing up at a leisurely pace – audience suspense. Want them to hurry.
LOBBY
The lift doors open Simon and Scarlett are there. Simons face shows panic.Kevin and Johnny are at the desk arguing with a receptionist.Simon presses the “close doors” button frantically.
IN THE LIFT
Simon and Scarlett are panicking about how to escape. Decide to use the stairs and find a back door.
LOBBY
Kevin and Johnny are arguing with the receptionist – they want to know what room Scarlett and Simon are in. Receptionist refuses to tell them. Goes to get manager.Johnny jumps over the front desk and uses the computer to search and finds the room number. Kevin checks the car is still outside, it is. They run upstairs.
OTHER STAIRS
Scarlett and Simon are running down and out round the back of the hotel.
HOTEL CORRIDOR AND ROOM
Kevin and Johnny run down the corridor and burst into room number 55. A woman is doing turndown service. They shout at her, she tells them the people in the room have just left.They run frantically back down the corridor and Kevin is about to take the stairs but Johnny says the lift will be quicker. – fast paced actions and music. They get in the lift. Doors close. It moves slowly. Stereotypical cheesy music plays. They are impatient. Kevin looks annoyed at Johnny. As soon as the door opens they spring out and run again frantically outside. The car is gone.
IN THE CAR
Scarlett is looking at a map. They are trying to decide where to go. Can’t agree on where. Simon tells her to close her eyes and point at the map and where ever she points to that’s the path they will follow. She points to Portsmouth. They decide to go there.
OUTSIDE THE HOTEL
Johnny on the phone to Mike. Apologising.
HOUSE
Mike is furious with the both of them. Tells them to drive around looking for Simon’s car but if they cannot find them they have to come back but Mike says “Trust me. You don’t want to come back here if you don’t find them.”
MOTORWAY - DARKER
early evening.Kevin and Johnny are driving along the motorway talking. Kevin sees Simon’s car parked on a grass verge. They pull over and run at the car - opening both doors. “ABANDONED!” they are furious. Call Mike again, tell him the bad news.The audience are left out of the loop in the abandonment of the car– a sign of things to come. Also creates suspense.
HOUSE - LIVING ROOM
Mike tells Pidge to go and help them in the search as he is the best at piecing the puzzles together and he knows Simon the best – he will know what Simon would do in a situation like this.
SERVICE STATION CAR PARK
We see Pidge pull up. He is trying to figure out what he should do, should he drive away? This shows his struggle. We sympathise with Pidge.
SERVICE STATION CAFÉ
Kevin and Johnny are eating - Pidge walks in.They tell him what happened.Pidge suggests that Simon would know not to stay anywhere near here because he knows how “conntected” the gang are in the area. Also says that they have to be in the UK because Scarlett did not have time to get her passport when they ran away. He asks a man where the nearest train station is.
AT THE STATION
Pidge looking at the departures. The long distance trains have not left yet. He sends Kevin to Platform 4, Johnny to Platform 1 and he runs to Platform 9.
RUNNING
Following Pidge to Platform 9He sees Simon helping Scarlett onto the train.Pidge is stopped in his tracks.Background noise muffles and fades away.All we hear Pidge breathing.Pidge thinks for a moment then springs into action running and jumping onto the train.
IN THE CARRIAGE
Pidge sees Scarlett and Simon finding a seat.He slides into one trying to stay hidden.
BACK AT THE STATION
Kevin and Johnny meet up again. Both are annoyed and ring Pidge.
IN THE CARRIAGE
Pidge’s phone rings. A recognisable ring tone that was a private joke between Simon and himself.Pidge panics and hits the answer button quickly.
SIMON AND SCARLETT
Simon’s face shows that he has heard this song. Listens, concerned at first but then smiles at the memory.
PIDGE
On the phone to Kevin. QUIETLY Tells them he’s on the train to Portsmouth. They argue. He wants them to go home and tell Mike they say they don’t want to have to face Mike. The will call him, keep him up to speed and then get the next train. Kevin hangs up.Pidge leans his head back. Annoyed and reluctant to let it go but he does.
SIMON AND SCARLETT
See them talking, laughing, planning. Time passes. Simon gets up to go to use the toilet. Pidge grabs a newspaper and hides his face. He is successful.
IN PORTSMOUTH
Simon and Scarlett get off the train. Pidge follows them to a little hotel on the seafront. They book a room. As soon as they have their key and leave reception he runs in, hastily books a room and follows them silently.
HOTEL ROOM
Simon and Scarlett think they are safely away.
CORRIDOR
Pidge leans against the wall. We again see him struggle trying to decide what to do.He turns to walk away.Then stops and puts his head in his hands.
HOTEL ROOM
There is a knock at the door. Scarlett is about to open it. Simon grabs her wrist before she can open the door. Suspense builds. He looks through the peep hole. Nothing can be seen.
CUTTING BETWEEN HOTEL ROOM AND CORRIDOR
Pidge has covered peep hole with his hand.Simon asks who is there?No reply.Pidge knocks again.Silence.“Spence, it’s me.”Simon realises that it is Pidge but is suspicious that he is not alone. They argue through the door. Pidge eventually convinces him that he is alone and lets him in.
HOTEL ROOM
They talk about how long their affair has been going on. Begin to argue. Pidge is hurt that Simon did not tell him. Simon explains. Pidge understands but tells them they will never be able to get away from Mike. Simon rhetorically asks what other options they have? Pidge accepts this, says goodbye to his best friend and then suggests that the least Simon could do would be to walk him to the train station.
NIGHT TIME - WALKING DOWN MAIN STREET OUTSIDE THE TRAIN STATION
Simon, Scarlett and Pidge walking, talking, laughing.Simon sees Kevin and Johnny further down the road.He misunderstands and becomes angry with Pidge thinking he has tricked them.Pidge has forgotten that Kevin and Johnny were coming, he did not mean for this to happen. Tries to convince Simon – he won’t listen to him. Pidge looks frustrated and begins walking towards Kevin and Johnny. Audience wonder he is going to do.
SIMON AND SCARLETT
Hide peering around the corner of the train station.
PIDGE
Walks up to Kevin and Johnny“I lost them.”Kevin and Johnny are annoyed with Pidge but understand how easy it is to lose them.He suggests they walk around and check hotels looking for them before they have to tell Mike.
SIMON AND SCARLETT
Simon sees what Pidge has done for them.
PIDGE
When Kevin and Johnny are not looking Pidge turns around to look in the direction of where Simon is hiding. Simon mouths “Thank you.” to Pidge. He is truly grateful.
A TRAIN PLATFORM
Simon and Scarlett get on a train again quickly.
MONTAGE
Shows the passage of time.The gangs useless searches.Almost catching them once - losing them again.Scarlett and Simon travelling around the UK - hotel after hotel - Renting cars.We see them getting tired of running away.We see the gang getting tired of the search apart from Mike who is adamant he will find them.
THE LAST DAY
Their two weeks is up.The audience has known the tragic end from the beginning.It begins with Scarlett and Simon in the car.No map.They know their way around where they are.
HOUSE
Mike and the gang are reassessing the search – going over the last week. Where Simon and Scarlett were last seen. Some want to end the search as it is not making them money like their usual work. Mike refuses to end it. The television is on in the background – volume turned down – the news report announcing Scarlett and Simon’s deaths comes on. Johnny tells one of the other gang members to turn the volume up. They all watch in stunned silence. Pidge’s face shows he is devastated.
NEWS REPORT
Takes over the screen.The television is turned off.Camera pans around to Scarlett and Simon sitting in an arm chair watching.We see they have faked their own deaths so that they could start a new life together.
THE END.
SynopsisNews report.
Flashback - 2 weeks earlier.Gang find out about Simon's love for Scarlett.Mike the gang leader tells Simon to take £10,000 and leave Britain forever, or get killed.Simon decides to leave but comes back for Scarlett.Simon and Scarlett are chased by the gang.Simon's best friend Pidge catches them, but helps them escape and tells Mike and the gang that he didn't see them.Simon and Scarlett fake their deaths.Goes back to the news report.